Dear JeanCarlo, yes, this is right...I like how you've been able to include video footage of the game. I am hoping that you can include some Messi images and/or to possibly help us know which player he is. Also, you've got to figure out how to balance the music and the narration--right now, the music and narration are at the same level and that needs to come down a bit. Also, keep writing...You have more to say about this, I'm sure.
Dear JeanCarlo, yes, this is right...I like how you've been able to include video footage of the game. I am hoping that you can include some Messi images and/or to possibly help us know which player he is. Also, you've got to figure out how to balance the music and the narration--right now, the music and narration are at the same level and that needs to come down a bit. Also, keep writing...You have more to say about this, I'm sure.
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